Well from the version i downloaded from this topic here are my comments
First off i think the map looks great .. like the added stuff .. fences and so on

also the jumpramps are fun with the battlebikes
The map seems a little dark but that is a good thing i think that will at least make it run smoother
So all in all good job

curious to see what the last version looks like
Now a few sidenotes ..
It took me quite a while to get all the files needed for this map to run coz apperantly u used some textures from other maps and unfortiunatly rather big ones too .. and when i say big i mean BIG
I'll make a list below to see what u used
Kee
first one u need is obviously the map and the textures within the archive
then u need the battlebike mod
BattleBikes 12 MB zipped from wich u basicly need all the files in there
nr 2 : U apperantly used some textures and static meshes from a map calles AS-Jumpship
AS-JumpShip 12,5 mb zipped from wich u need the Jumpshipobjects.utx 11,32 mb and the JumpShipobjects.usx 4,8 mb
nr 3 : U used some more textures from a map called
DM-Urotsukidoji 42,5 mb zipped from wich u need the Urotmesh.usx 22,9 mb and the Urottex 44,8 mb ..
As u can see this makes for a redicilously large download
57 Mb compressed from the redirect server
134 Mb directly from the gameserver
So my suggestion would be to try and use the standard textures / static meshes ( i know the clan pics and so on are cuustom of course)this will definaly keep the size down
Hehe that's about it from me
Hope it helped a bit
Cheers
Car...
Ow btw i've put it on my testserver so if u peeps are curious what it looks like play it there .. ive put all the downloads for the map on a different redirect //.. the password to get in =
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